None Poem by Jefrey Smith

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Rating: 3.5


I had a thought
but it escaped me
though it is gone
it still plagues me

I hold its memory
but not its meaning
each day its fading
it is still remaining

I seek each thought
to learn its teaching
to gain the knowledge
as mine for keeping

to hold my thoughts
those deemed worthy
requires paper
pen and a hurry

Not all my thoughts
are worth the keeping
but the ones escaping
hold the most possibility

And though these thoughts
get away from me
I am never free
I wait for the time
they choose to return
their knowledge to me
so I can write them down
and they can let me be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefrey Smith 13 May 2017

This poem is about the fact that my mind generates phrases that I do not have time to write down...because I'm working, driving, or otherwise engaged...And the turn of a phrase, or a thought not written, becomes lost..it's still in my mind..a vague memory..And when I try to remember them, they will not return. so I can write them down. As far as this notion to improve... I believe critiquing on this premise is like telling someone you don't like the way they comb their hair because of the color. Have a nice day

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