Not Any More Poem by Mary Amrutha

Not Any More



How can you make your friends fight
How can you make them cry
How can you make them believe in you
and talk behind their back.

How can you do this to me
I trusted you my friend,
but not any more...

Monday, March 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
something that I faced in my life..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 March 2014

not any more..very good decision..

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Daniel Brick 24 March 2014

I just caught the title of this poem while scrolling down POEMHUNTER'S list of poems submitted over the past seven days. I was assessing the first stanza when suddenly the poem stopped three lines later. At first I thought there should be more quatrains like that first one that fleshed out the reason for your disappointment, but then I realized the abruptness is part of the message. You're severing ties - at least for now - with someone who wounded you, and they don't deserve even a second quatrain. It's sad but true.

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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