Not What You'Re Thinking Poem by David Whalen

Not What You'Re Thinking



Hot and sweaty
Moist and sticky
Can feel so sweet
Can smell so icky

Can make you feel good
All warm and fuzzy
Break out in a sweat
Feel wilted and scuzzy

Sheets get all soggy
Clothes fly off in abandon
Relief must be had….
One must take a hand in….

Oh… wait just a moment!
Wow! What a bummer!
Don’t know what you’re thinking
But I’m writing about Summer! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nooruddeen Mm 26 May 2010

David If you hadn't written the last line in your poem I would have gone somewhere else. Good work Rgds Noor

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David Whalen

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