Notes Towards An Elegy Comments

PLease keep writing and submitting, your poems are very touching (my heart)

5 Stars Full for this excvellently worded poem. I have enjoyed very much this impressive poem. Thank you for sharing

Loved the lines.... The accumulation of departures, mornings of staring down light. and... You noted the delicate integrity of its fretwork.// also.. your mother is upstairs sitting on your bed, nurturing scraps in the poor light. A handful of imageries sewn with delicacy in such an elegant style. I appreciate your great poetic skill and choice of words. Thanks dear for sharing such a nice poem. A huge 10 for it. Regards. Subhas, India.