Nothing There Poem by Reed Simiele

Nothing There

Rating: 5.0


You make me feel like i'm walking on air
Even though there's nothing there
My heart flutters when you walk by
You could careless if id die
I could see a you and me
But you would just laugh at me
No matter what the circumstance may be
I can always dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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