Now That You'E Gone Poem by 3MI LIANA

Now That You'E Gone

Rating: 2.5


now that you're gone
i feel as if my path has become clear
now that you're gone
i feel that i can finally breathe
now that you're gone
i can spread my wings and fly
now that you're gone
my world has entirely changed
now that you're gone
i finally realized that i never needed you here
and that you were only in my way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
OuSs@Ma Samouna 19 April 2009

very nice.... keep up the good work 10/10 thanks for sharing.

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~*adriana*~ ~*Salazar*~ 18 April 2009

very optimistic and refreshing. It is obvious that you put alot of effot and heart in such a poem. :)

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Delicate Heart 18 April 2009

it 's amazing it may takes the breath away with it delicacy

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Subroto Chatterjee 04 May 2009

Ah, finally you've grown up...all of us have passed through this stage...but you 'poemed' it naturally. And stay calm inside too.... Cheers. Subroto

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natshka danda 29 April 2009

Just keep writing my, friend. You can always revise them when some rhyme strikes you

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Tony Fiona 24 April 2009

that's very good keep it up.

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C. P. Sharma 22 April 2009

Good self expressive poetry. Keep it up. I think my 'Love Affair' can help you a little. CP

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Justice For All 19 April 2009

it was really great keep it up

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