Saturday, April 19, 2014

Now That You'Re Gone... Comments

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Now that you're gone everything has changed
But when I look around why does it feel the same
Now that you're gone I feel the pain
But it's the only thing keeping me sane
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vishal parmar
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Vishal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 22 April 2014

Excellently written sad poem, I could feel your emotions with every line. Siya_! !

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The sad emotions of the poem and the feeling is very nice to read.

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