A heart is torn open,
A love is broken,
A life is empty,
With few words spoken.
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Love, is a nice topic, it will come with different things those just make it complete Love will come with betray, a broken heart and hate....but i deny my assumptions here. Love is the thing that will remain in our heart A great work well done.
The thoughts in this one are good and carried well, but you must check the spelling. Attention to spelling is important. Adeline