Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Now Your Gone Comments

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A heart is torn open,
A love is broken,
A life is empty,
With few words spoken.
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alexus jones
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Adeline Foster 01 February 2013

The thoughts in this one are good and carried well, but you must check the spelling. Attention to spelling is important. Adeline

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 26 September 2012

Love, is a nice topic, it will come with different things those just make it complete Love will come with betray, a broken heart and hate....but i deny my assumptions here. Love is the thing that will remain in our heart A great work well done.

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