O C E A N Poem by Camelia Dragusin

O C E A N

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The ocean longed for you until it bled
Childish cradle of the dead
Then you arrived
But I was already consumed

Sunday, September 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,longing,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 September 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly penned in good diction with conviction. Exquisite depiction of tragedy of a lonely heart earnestly seeking unreciprocated love, nicely brought forth with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Camelia. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2016

Timing is everything. Thanks, Camelia

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Howard Mcdougal 04 September 2016

Enjoyed reading your fine work thank you for sharing

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Howard Mcdougal 04 September 2016

Enjoyed reading your work thank you for sharing

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Camelia Dragusin

Camelia Dragusin

Transilvania, România
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