Obsession Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Obsession

Rating: 3.7


perfection, flawlessly she is
everything I want. she smiles
and my world glows in beams
of golden light. her hand rests
upon me and it's ecstasy. her
lips touch my neck, i'm blind
with pleasure, i spasm and
push to bury mysel within
her.

her breath on her saliva
freezes my spine. i am
hers and there is no other
way. she is my life, my everything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

Good content but there has got to be a better way of saying. So maybe rework the words a bit.

0 0 Reply
Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2, Pulls out all the erotic-poem cliches (I think the word 'ecstasy' should be permanently retired from written English) and does nothing new.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success