Obviously Poem by kenneth william snow

Obviously

Rating: 3.3


i promenade through passages
of crusted, concrete memory
and revel in plasticity

the silent, satin shackle
that binds my heart absurdly;
ingratiates my privacy

our mutual psychoses
festooned in stately pageantry;
liberates my lethargy

in tilted shades of
symmetry...I relish
apoplectically

moments squandered
recklessly—void of
needed harmony

i lanquish—faded
aimlessly
intent on inane
ecstasy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maggie Just May 05 June 2006

This is exactly what I was saying, Ken. A wonderful use of craft here.

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Joshua Swanson 27 January 2006

Ah, adjectives. Your choice of words is exemplary, an astonishing feat of poetry. Loved it. ~Josh

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***** ********* 22 January 2006

Yes Ken, we do this far to often. Far better to take a nice bubbly bath me thinks! Great poem, love the language, oh for an education like yours! Grinning at you with 10 from cheered up by your poem! I know! mad init? Tai

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