Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Ocean Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

There's an aching in my bones
A void I cannot fill
Without the sand between my toes
My mind is never still
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Chinedu Dike 23 July 2015

A well articulated poem nicely penned with insight. A CALM, SERENE, DESTRUCTIVE FORCE - a line that captures the essence of the poet's conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 July 2015

The salt speckled breeze The seas relentless motion Lapping at my knees a nice musicality.. Thanks for sharing

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