Ode To My Earth Comments

THE POEM IS VERY GOOD BUT ITS VERY VERY DIFFICULT TO LEARN

Quite an origanl crafting of ideas and interpretation of what is wrong with us. An unanswered prayer by many to be sure. There are quite a few passages I like about the way you phrased your thoughts. I also like those passages where you used many words beginning with the same consonants; ex., convenience did bring the confusion. The man learnt not only to speak but to snitch, to cheat, to communicate, to control and to convey. and still spoiling in search of something selfish. Everywhere - he is found, not even a single piece of ground shall be sans him. Very nicely done.