Ode To The Boy In The Rain Poem by Lexi Muegge

Ode To The Boy In The Rain

Rating: 5.0


The abundance of color that swims behind your eyes-
to expound on its infinitude,
as i strain through smog in mine
I can only try.

An outpouring of utterances
form reels of images off your lips-
my voice quivers
as drips form stick figure depictions,
I can only try.

Still, my love,

When the night shatters,
& the world around us turns to white
I'll press your trembling hands against my face,
I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft

I will always try

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams,romance,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

From my side 1000000++++++++

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

The abundance of color that swims behind your eyes- to expound on its infinitude, as i strain through smog in mine I can only try....good line

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft I will always try....... fine poetry

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

Beautiful Poetry...my favorite line.. " " When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft I will always try" " " ... thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

When the night shatters, & the world around us turns to white I'll press your trembling hands against my face, I'll hum your song til your breath grows soft IT IS THE HIGHEST TRIBUTE ONE PAYS TO A POETESS WHEN THE WORDS ARE SIMPLY QUOTED lady poetry tree

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