Of Sky, Senryu Poem by indira babbellapati

Of Sky, Senryu



striking lightning
left the sky blind
refreshing rain!

snow-white cloud
inching toward the moon
celestial game!

a lion-cloud
hind legs fixed on the sky
preying on a star!

one dark cloud
feasting multiple stars
how to describe?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 25 October 2011

of sky....different imagery yet it creates same wonderful picturesque strength and fragility merges together and creates a bang.... You and your great style...mind-working piece, Mam.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Wonderful imagery... Good write

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Wonderful imagery... Good write

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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