Of Sky, Senryu Poem by indira babbellapati

Of Sky, Senryu



striking lightning
left the sky blind
refreshing rain!

snow-white cloud
inching toward the moon
celestial game!

a lion-cloud
hind legs fixed on the sky
preying on a star!

one dark cloud
feasting multiple stars
how to describe?

Sunday, October 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: sky,snow,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 25 October 2011

of sky....different imagery yet it creates same wonderful picturesque strength and fragility merges together and creates a bang.... You and your great style...mind-working piece, Mam.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Wonderful imagery... Good write

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Wonderful imagery... Good write

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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