Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Of Swans And Seraphim Comments

Rating: 5.0

how like pollen were the hands of that beautiful Hunter.
her mouth matrilineal of midsummer,
she took foal through the spine and ate messily that ambrosia.
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Heaven Fay
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Fabrizio Frosini 09 September 2015

translating your 'finale' into Italian.. ... so when I awoke next, I was haunted with the memory of her breath there. ... e quando fui sveglia, mi ossessionò il ricordo del suo respiro sulla mia pelle.

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Roseann Shawiak 08 September 2015

Very soft, tender and delicate poem, somewhat mystical in nature. Rhythm and rhyme are sublime. Great poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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