Off Course Poem by Maren Louise

Off Course



Pain as deep as a cavern,
Torrid, blistering, burn,
Bleak, withered, blight,
Pounding heart in flight,
If only I could let you go,
Hollow heart, love can't grow,
Great Spirit fill my core,
The One True Love, I adore,
Lead me to thy Source,
For I have fallen, so off course.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 10 May 2009

A lost love leaves such a cavern - very well written 10

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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

wow... layered in meaning and ambiguous. i love it

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