Friday, April 23, 2010

Offer You My Heart Comments

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Even on a wintry day,
The sunlight in your eyes
Would warm my soul
And show me light.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 24 April 2010

Your first stanza is superb. A beautiful, lyrical write. I love your rhymes. Warm wishes, Sandra

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