Wednesday, September 14, 2005

Offerings And Offsprings Comments

Rating: 3.5

She talked about my latest offerings
as if they had with eager little feet
rushed over to her Lazyboy Recliner
to climb up on her lap and talk so sweet
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 14 September 2005

I like this....it sort of reminds me of my writing....they're my babies too.

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Raynette Eitel 14 September 2005

This really describes how I feel about each of my poems...my little children who finally grow up and allow themselves to be printed somewhere and hopefully they are tough enough to survive the critics. I love 'eger little feet.' Good job. Raynette

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This is fabulous, Herbert. Although I've not read through your entire oeuvre, this one is among the best of yours' that I've read! I give it a 10 - because it has compelled me to do so.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 September 2005

Reminds me of Grandma taking care of the grandkids while the adults took off to party! I like this, Herbert. L

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