oh, darkness, darkness of my soul,
endured with the time and still not gone,
marred half a far to hollowed bottom,
manacled diamond, by love forgotten.
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love gives u pain and ecstasy poet successfully portrayed minute nuances of heartfelt pain of love
Very good! A fine elegy, that somewhat incorporates a classic rethoric and a modern literary outfit into a fine piece of poetry. Congratulations!
thanks indeed