Saturday, April 4, 2015

Oh, Darkness, Darkness Of My Soul Comments

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oh, darkness, darkness of my soul,
endured with the time and still not gone,
marred half a far to hollowed bottom,
manacled diamond, by love forgotten.
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Christina Ader
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Very good! A fine elegy, that somewhat incorporates a classic rethoric and a modern literary outfit into a fine piece of poetry. Congratulations!

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Christina Ader 14 May 2015

thanks indeed

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Rakhi Jayashankar 04 April 2015

love gives u pain and ecstasy poet successfully portrayed minute nuances of heartfelt pain of love

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Christina Ader 08 April 2015

thanks for understanding, that`s encouraging

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