Oh Dear Poem by Fatima Obaid
Oh Dear
All the days and nights
Have spend in love fight
Ur love have bounded me so tight
That even I can't keep quite
This is might be wrong
But I can't get you away from my sight
Your love has given me a bright light
OH Dear! I am at loves height
The 5th line has a certain gramatical error. 'might be' should come before 'wrong'.. Anyway, its a nice write.. It'll get better and mature as xou continue witing. Keep sharing. :)
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4/19/2024 7:57:58 PM # 1.0.0.1119
'this might be wrong' should be the correct sentence.. Takecare.