' An Office Women' Poem by Fatima Obaid

' An Office Women'

Rating: 2.7


I was very depressed what i did
thinking about how the day was it
had lot tension in my mind
i wanted to relax but i can't
i was scared that my boss will scold me
i was puzzled how i did this
then i cheering and pleasing my self
Don't worry Girl it was just a file exchange

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 November 2015

lovely and meaningful poem. fears and tensions are well expressed. thank you. tony

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 September 2015

A meaningful poem.....................................................

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2013

A lively piece but how could you write it so well being a school girl? (and if you drop 'is' in second line, it will give clearer meaning. :))

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