Oh! Death! Comments

At 18 it is very far away, immerse yourself with the living and fun loving, this will promote a long and happy life. The sadness expressed so simply is inevitable but so distant that you may be reassured that life is with the living, and to live is to live it well. Keep writing and watch for tenses and plurals and singulars.

Sad, just sad, do try to enjoy living, it`s far more fun, you wrote the poem very well though.