Oh, Lord Comments

Again I was really pleased with this work Alisa. The spiritualism in it is overwhelming and it does not suffer from a sort of coryism that I tend to assoociate with, apparent religious works. In fact I wonder if it is a religious work at all. The line 'Watching the birth of summer’s morning' is beautiful, but it had me wondering if it should be morning and not day. but then morning has to come into being and so it does give a wonderfulimpression.