Sunday, September 27, 2015

Oh Moon My Lover Comments

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Oh moon! Remember me.
Look favourably on me before my time is done.
Show me who my love will be,
So my heart can cease its lonely mourn.
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Paul Ogbuigwe
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Chinedu Dike 10 October 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned from the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. A well articulated poem of lamentation, hope and love that bristles with insight. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing Paul. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Paul Ogbuigwe 18 January 2016

Thank you very much for your support, it means a lot coming from a poet such as yourself.

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