Oh Sweet Oblivion Comments

This is a superbly written poem that describes with consummate skill and great emotional power the agony of distress which can only be stemmed by turning off the lights. I have to agree with Shagun too, about the line: 'The pain screams in cyclone waves cresting in agony and swamping the trembling soul' Exceptional penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Up to you usually high standard Lynn, well done, Jerry

i didnt get the name at first but ater i read this amazing poem i understood exactly what you were meaning this is an awsome poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

what a poem..completely offbeat....beautifully penned.... The pain screams in cyclone waves cresting in agony and swamping the trembling soul