Old Flame Poem by Deepak Amembal

Old Flame

Rating: 5.0


Some old desire
Distinctly making
Different faces
Dulls a life
But the flowers
Remember death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Magee 05 March 2005

Beautiful, Deepak. I admire your work. Chrissie

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Allan James Saywell 01 March 2005

Deepak, the flowers remember death, that got you a ten, i like it you could have made it shorter, ten more minutes of thought, but it doesn't happen overnight regards AJS

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