Amavasya (Moonless Night)

Rating: 4.5

Get the moon elsewhere
The lights look calm
And their fire in heaven
Is tingling
But like time
The hopes keep
The peace beyond
Crossed stars.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 26 February 2009

good piece Deepak...indepth poem...holds colorful images inside...10

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Rachel Clark 17 June 2005

So beautiful! Incredible Imagery

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Nasra Al Adawi 22 February 2005

The style sems like haiku...Another touching work of yours...keep them coming

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