Aging man your shoes do not shine
upon jagged century's wooden floor
scuffed, swollen leathers, buckles
not laces, bereft of brush that buffed
they tap your time, just time for you
where ghosts still walk and gather
to hear, in a back room on folk night
plucking on your jaw harp, your empty
pint stoic, but full to you, as is the room
and crackling fire your applause, for off
eyes closed, you journey with the flames
forever the beat of your own story
at peace, long after closing time, play.
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Also from PoetrySoup 'So many lines hit really hard for me including " eyes closed, you journey with the flames" " where ghosts still walk and gather" soul stirring! I love also the flow of this poem! '
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PoetrySoup 'a thought-provoking read, Clive. I felt twinges of sadness reading of the man playing his old jaw harp alone, listening to the fire and its applause. I agree so often we journey with the same flames playing the beat of our own story after closing time. I'm wowed by this one! '