Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Old Wounds! Comments

Rating: 5.0

It gives you un grieved sorrow
And an un forgiven hurt..
To look back at all those years
And realize that..
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Salman Afaaq
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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2015

I am paying the price for the hurt.. Which is.. The curse of a love in vain….! ! It's a beautiful touching poem...............10

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Kelly Kurt 05 May 2015

Loving is never in vain. It is given with no expectation of return. The pain felt is the hollow where desire was carved out. Still, an excellent poem, Salman. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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