Oldage Poem by BOEMS BY JA WIZDUMBs BY JA

Oldage

Rating: 5.0


Our car, among the classics
Our things, became antique
We, turned into relics
And our friends, befit a clique

Our cottage, now the hermitage
Our home, is a relique
Our life, will be a heritage
And when we talk, it's a critique

What we do, has grown archaic
Our habits, turned oblique
Our thinking, esoteric
But we've, become unique
WIZDUMBs by JA 418

Friday, January 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2018

Among classic things your car is amazing definitely. Cottage has now become the hermitage. Old age provokes thought and needs special care. This is an amazing poem....10

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