Friday, June 29, 2012

On Brand New Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are so many ghosts now,
Where did all the time go?
An old woman stares in the mirror,
All she has loved is gone
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Patti Masterman
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Valerie Dohren 03 July 2012

Very touching and poignant.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 June 2012

And when she lays her down again, She'll fly on brand new wings.. beautiful lines carry equally beautiful meanings! Well written poem on old age and the gone youth and beauty!

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