Monday, January 19, 2009

On Fire. Comments

Rating: 4.9

The words spell doom as, looming into view
Firey flames leap from plane's engine, and catch
Hold of the hearts of passengers and crew
Alike. The icy chilled air could not match
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Fay Slimm
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 January 2009

The first stanza was special. It set a marvelous scene for the reader. It captured the early moments. A good rendition of the event. GW62

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Kris Smith 19 January 2009

A brilliant testament to a mans bravery well written Fay 10 ++++ Chris

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Lynda Robson 19 January 2009

A miracle indeed happened on the Hudson river, and the experience and bravery of the pilot saved the day and the lives of so many, a wonderful tribute Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Marvin Brato 19 January 2009

F reed from death a hero's cause y es, he is immortal!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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