On Going Poem by Ena Ena

On Going

Rating: 4.9


We are on going
Observing, feeling
Touching, guessing
Glad and sad filling our mind
Both we are laughing
And crying.

Thursday, October 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nisa Putri 23 November 2018

Great poem in short, but strong in meaning, excellent piece

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bri edwards 04 November 2018

i would use ongoing, but i've noticed several PH poets breaking some of my words into two words, e.g. somewhere i would write as one word, while others.....(in U.K. and former 'Commonwealth nations [i feel]) ..... might use some where. a playful poem. to MyPoemList. it also has a nice 'sound' to it. bri ;)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Through perception we are feeling glad and sad filling our minds. An amazing perceptional poem is shared.10

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Muzahidul Reza 12 October 2017

We are on going Observing, feeling Touching, guessing Glad and sad filling our mind Both we are laughing And crying. An excellent piece of poetry full of practical knowledge, wisdom and experiences

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Muzahidul Reza 12 October 2017

On Going activities are filling our brain and mind with various feelings, you have written a great poem dear poetess. I praise this one, thank you for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++ 10

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