On Having An Amazing Orgasm Poem by Dan Brown

On Having An Amazing Orgasm

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Moaning.
Groaning.
Mmming.
Aaaahing.
Filling
the air.
Sliding.
Riding.
Bucking.
As the pair,
slowly
fucking,
show
their love.
Eyes blinking.
Minds linking
a million
erotic thoughts
as they rapidly flow.
God’s name.
Taken in vain.
As he screams
he’s about to blow.
It erupts on demand.
All over his hand.
And as he sits gazing.
He exclaims,
“That was bloody amazing! ”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Wright 12 August 2007

I'm not sure what to say... Damn that's a good poem! ~Ray

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David Jargo 03 March 2007

Wow Dan, I just ran right into this one on my alphabetical journey through your work... I love the rhythm of this one[no pun, honestly], it makes the imagery very visual!

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Heather Michelle Craig 31 March 2006

You described it ever so well; -)

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