Dan Brown

Rookie - 62 Points (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

On Having An Amazing Orgasm - Poem by Dan Brown

Moaning.
Groaning.
Mmming.
Aaaahing.
Filling
the air.
Sliding.
Riding.
Bucking.
As the pair,
slowly
fucking,
show
their love.
Eyes blinking.
Minds linking
a million
erotic thoughts
as they rapidly flow.
God’s name.
Taken in vain.
As he screams
he’s about to blow.
It erupts on demand.
All over his hand.
And as he sits gazing.
He exclaims,
“That was bloody amazing! ”


Comments about On Having An Amazing Orgasm by Dan Brown

  • (8/12/2007 11:25:00 AM)


    I'm not sure what to say... Damn that's a good poem!
    ~Ray
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  • (3/3/2007 4:03:00 PM)


    Wow Dan, I just ran right into this one on my alphabetical journey through your work... I love the rhythm of this one[no pun, honestly], it makes the imagery very visual! (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2006 12:36:00 PM)


    You described it ever so well; -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 31, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, February 28, 2011


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