A Message Poem by Dan Brown

A Message

Rating: 5.0


This is a message to say
I still cry every day.
I think of you,
What we went through.
I’m glad I couldn’t stay.

If you play with fire, you will get burnt.
You played with fire, I hope you’ve learnt.

This is a message to tell you
That I am hurting too.
I’m barely sane,
I feel the pain.
But I’m still getting through.

If you play with fire, you will get burnt.
You played with fire, I hope you’ve learnt.

This is a message to say
I’m finally out your way.
You didn’t want me
We could never agree.
But now, you see, you pay.

This is my message, please don’t cry,
This is my message saying goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Al-kurdi 28 June 2009

for me, i see a cause-and-result message which everyone has to learn...... good work Mr. Brown

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Mary Ali 16 May 2007

Hi Dan, It's so beautiful. I feel that I can almost taste the pain. It's so deep and moving, a wonderful piece of poetry. Well done. Mary

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Amanda Figure 04 January 2007

i luv this poem its like i can feel the pian in this poem its really good

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Tamsin Burnett 21 February 2006

how come your poems seem to be written about my feelings? ? i've never read a poem that sums them up so well. its so beautiful.xxx

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Bridgid Patrick 16 February 2006

Hi dan, i like this one.. brings back certain memories......x

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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