Friday, July 4, 2008

On My Way To Paradise Comments

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On my way to paradise
I met this stranger along the way
Later, someone who became dear to me
Who made me want to stay
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Nitum Jain
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Nitum. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mark Nwagwu 05 July 2008

and with this prized stranger, I entered paradise now multiplied by his cross.

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