On My Way To School (Ballad Attempt) Poem by Venus Fire

On My Way To School (Ballad Attempt)

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It was a pleasant day
walking down the road
too bad it's so early
carrying a heavy load
on my way to school

As I walk down the same street
taking in what I see
quiet birds are flying by
as if they want to flee
on my way to school

then I see a body
lying on the ground
looking cold and brittle
its face showing a frown
on my way to school

I get to the ravine
and smell the fresh air
and hearing the running water
thinking life is fair
on my way to school

I arrive at my goal
tired as can be
the day has only started
and I already want to sleep
because of my journey to school

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 20 February 2015

Good imaginations in the poem and likes.

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Marieta Maglas 15 November 2009

I arrive at my goal wonderful confessional poem 10++

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