On The Edge. Comments

Brillliant imagery in this Fay, it flows and keeps the reader interested until the very last word, 10 Lynda xx

Dusty scorched limbs painfully move, within A short while the edge between life and dying Of waterless dry seems to broaden, in Expectation bright lighning cracks the sky. --------- Stunning metaphors and magery fay.........meaningful creation....10+++

on the wedge of rain..a lovely painting there

wow Fay...this is an awesome write...such clear images you have written here...Fi 10++++