Saturday, August 3, 2013

On The Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

We're off on an adventure
With our lives as our load,
What lies ahead,
Is an open road.
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Irene D..
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Mark Arvizu 03 August 2013

Really liked the 1st part. The 2nd & 3rd I lost where you were going.

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Jamin Mckinney 03 August 2013

very beatiful stanza at the beginning.

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Dave Walker 03 August 2013

A great poem with a great flow to it. A great write.

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