On Waking Up... Poem by Portia Burton

On Waking Up...

Rating: 4.5


Sometimes while going to sleep
I feel I am my own tomb,
The ceiling above its marble lid,
Or am I returning to mother's womb?

The walls become white roses,
And stoop down gently to cover me,
While from the bed-sheet below I feel
Grass-blades rising to penetrate me.

Slowly the lid melts and in its place
Vast blue sky is all around,
Stars start rising from my body,
And my being becomes a stardust cloud.

On waking up when I look in the mirror,
Its blankness fills me with terror.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
poem about a vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 October 2013

A beautiful piece! I too have similar feelings at times. If I may say, the last word does not fit well with the mood of the poem, I suspect.

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