Once A Red Rose Poem by fade ward

Once A Red Rose

Rating: 5.0


once a red rose
bleeding of pain
the black knife that caused its pain
the bloody petals of life
fell to the ground
the blood of a fallen friend
the pain he took
once a red rose
always in pain
but know the rose
is no longer red
the fallen friend is now a
black rose
living in the shadows
the only pain he feels is
the pain of being a fallen friend

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Dragon Thunder 12 June 2009

i dont know why but i keep coming back to this poem i dont know why its just so great i am lookin through everyones elses and yet this one tends to draw me back here nice poem great words for a great poet give ya a 10

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Dragon Thunder 12 June 2009

nice poem great words for a great poet give ya a 10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

Red Rose signifies passion, beauty and love.Its like a game, you win, lose or draw!

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Dragon Thunder 09 June 2009

what sad poem but yet the way you put you or someone else in the spot as a flower what i mean is you refer a person to a red rose and the petals that fell to the ground bleed of pain and a black knife that cut the once red rose is now a black rose he now hides in the shadows and the only pain he feel is the ffallen friend

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