Once Upon A Lifetime Comments

contentment being the focus and welbeing the intention nothing can stop peace to the mind...well made poem....

Really nice, loved it. -shannon

This is a real good poem...I like writings that continue repeating a certain phrase, especially a phrase like this, followed by loving things...'I will never leave you...I never will want more..'..thank you...I have some new ones, too. You will like 'Modified Bodies' and some others....keep writing. thank you..