Thursday, December 16, 2004

Once Upon A Time Comments

Rating: ★4.1

Once upon a time
In a house so big and wide
The family that lived there
Were so happy inside
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Jacqueline Shor
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savana 11 August 2020

it is a very small story

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 March 2015

Splendid thought. Excellent write.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 16 December 2004

Jacqueline, the images you portray are exquisite! The actual meter could use a bit of tweaking and revision to make this one a masterpiece. Excellent work.

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Jacqueline Shor

Jacqueline Shor

Revere, Mass.
Jacqueline Shor
Jacqueline Shor
Revere, Mass.
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