Saturday, October 17, 2015

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I’m black like coal,
with deep faith living within my soul.

I’m red like fire,
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Melvina Germain
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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

Whatever the color you can only see the positives, says a lot about you. Thanks Melvina

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

I enjoyed how you gave your own personal take in each of the similes involving the colors. Almost like a psychological test. What is red like? Some people may say anger, you related it to your passion. What is yellow? Although many may say the sun, they would say because of warmth or light. Your yellow sun wants freedom for everyone. You passed the test.: -) Beautiful poem, Melvina.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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