Saturday, November 23, 2013

One Dark And Dismal Christmas Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was on a cold December day
That Christmas changed for good,
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Howard Savage 16 January 2016

This is a long poem, great poem, but you might lose your audience. Keep writing, don't try to say it all in one poem. Check out some of my short poems.

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Paul Brookes 23 November 2013

Great poem amusing and bitter sweet. Sad when a parent is seen to have feet of clay and turns from hero to zero. BB: O))

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