Wednesday, November 4, 2015

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Everything shimmers
with the sound of the train
rattling over the bridge
especially the ears and nostrils and teeth
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Joseph Millar
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Halin Roche 27 April 2016

very interesting poem.... i enjoyed a lot....

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Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

'I mistook the train for a thunder storm, I mistook the willow tree for a home, it's nothing to brag about when you think of it spending this time all alone.' Very interesting lines and a fine poem.. Thank you for sharing Joseph...

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Kelly Kurt 04 November 2015

An interesting poem, Joseph. I enjoyed. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 04 November 2015

sweet wine of virginia, good writing, thanks, go on..

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