One Day Poem by David Darbyshire

One Day

Rating: 4.5


There was a day
when I felt great
it was in may
by the back gate

The back gate is high
and I am a small guy
she was on the other side
I really had to decide

I called out: ' My Sweet'
she replied: ' Yes my Dear'
I didn't want to repeat
I did have some fear

So I opened the gate
expecting a debate
but she wasn't wearing a thread
didn't make it to the house,
we did it in the shed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosemary Du Preez 22 May 2006

This is quite sweet. It does seem a little unfinished however it is still well written and did enjoy the tale to be told. Well done with this one and will definitely read a few more of yours soon. Rosemary

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