Sunday, September 16, 2007

One Ember Day Comments

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Crying, dying, lying, on the ground beneath my tree,
My final tears still falling, slowly stealing life from me,
The ghost that haunts my memories, and smiles at me once more,
Can only tell me stories of what we had done before.
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Nisho Olme
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Marc Mannheimer 16 September 2007

That's really quite beautiful - nicely done. Nice rhythm, nice sentiments.

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