Tuesday, October 27, 2015

One Final Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

The old man rested quietly
His breathing labored and well spaced
His long gray hair spread across the pillow
Partially covering his wrinkled face
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Lynn F Clemons
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Donna C. 28 October 2015

Beautiful sentiment about life. This is probably my favorite one!

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

As an old man, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks, Lynn

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